Wows...
Your comment sounds a tiny bit cheesy.. I'm nto sure why, but it doesn't matter. I don't know WHY the first thing I thought was that that was so cheesy, I blame bob the builder, I swear!
I feel The Forbidden Love, Doubt, Hope, and Sorrow, just as you hoped I [the listener] would feel. I think its very lovely and sweet that you would make a peice for your girlfriend, and I hope you two have a fine life, really! You certainly deserve it after submitting a great song to enjoy and think to. [[I'm sure I sound cheezy too! :D]]
Off the rant... I love the simplicity of the peice! This in no means it is simple, I gave you a vote of five, its just that you diddnt add so much flashy... CRAP, that nearly everyone puts here! I'll just say that it was so good that it motivated me to write a review... Well, I mostly wrote to wish you and your girlfriend good, but ONLY doing that wouldn't be very nice, would it?
I have no critique to add in other than the few second pause about halfway through... was that intended? I noticed a different tempo, so i'm guessing I am. I myself am not a fan of having two songs in one song, but you stayed away from that. Just be careful about making two songs in one.. for MY tastes, i'm sure many others like it!